My fourth book in this series. As I continue the series, I’m finding less adventure . Still enjoying the thrill of the hunt for killers, and loving the Mackenzie White character, but the stories are somewhat all the same storyline. The editing is somewhat, no, very, poorly done. Every paged has errors in phrases, entire sentences, and misuse of pronouns. Before He Feels has been the worse one yet. Doesn’t anyone read after a “final” edit! It’s very annoying to me.

I love this series of books. However, the misuse of grammar and wording makes it hard to determine just WHO you are talking about. A he when it should be a she. A wrong name used for the final suspect “Carlton”. Someone needs to proofread these before they are released to iBooks. (Not sure if any other online reading markets have the same issue)