By the 3~5 books of the series , I was feeling a more childish reaction and had made me feel as if the writing was more sophomoric reader rather then an adult reader

Another amazing book if you can get over the horrible grammar mistakes. Come on Blake, it’s time for you to get a new editor. You’re storylines are too good to have rookie mistakes in the writing. I look forward to Book #3 - even if I have to look past the grammar issues again. It’s hard to put down these books. Every chapter has you wanting more!

This book was very good. I loved it.

Although I did enjoy the story line, it is very difficult to see past the many, many mistakes that the author makes regarding his own character. Wrong names and places, it is very distracting and takes away from the overall experience.

There were many spelling errors.

I thought the story was well played out and enjoyed the book a lot! Towards the end I did find a lot of typos however. Wishing a little more detail was put into the editing. There were places with the incorrect character named, type of day was misstated, and at one point an s was present instead of “a”. But overall I enjoyed this storyline.

Great story but for this author to not have a good editor is a major mistake. Very sad.

Really enjoyed this book. It is a great read

The book had a decent storyline but there were so many spelling errors as well as calling people by the wrong names and timing that was way off. This took a lot away from the story and made it very difficult to concentrate. It’s as if they released this book without editing it first.